Monday, September 17, 2018

667. Will Never Be Your Pawn Again Comments

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You tried to sacrifice me in too many pointless gambits
when there was never any need to do so
you never gained in the resulting moves
as no one ever wanted to take it
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Jaden Knight
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Ifediirichukwu Victor 17 September 2018

what a nice poem with proper coinage... a poem of regret and decision. congratulations read my poem To the one I fell for thanks

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John Beaton 17 September 2018

Fine statement of defiance, Aries, handled well with the sustained chess metaphor. It lends itself to being read on different levels (e.g. political and personal) . Nicely done.

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