You tried to sacrifice me in too many pointless gambits
when there was never any need to do so
you never gained in the resulting moves
as no one ever wanted to take it
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Fine statement of defiance, Aries, handled well with the sustained chess metaphor. It lends itself to being read on different levels (e.g. political and personal) . Nicely done.
what a nice poem with proper coinage... a poem of regret and decision. congratulations read my poem To the one I fell for thanks