687. My Deed As A Bloom To Your Feet 271109 Poem by Raman Savithiri

687. My Deed As A Bloom To Your Feet 271109



He goes into dense forest
Climbs up steep crest
Plucks out a rare flower
Comes down to offer to his lover
To make her happy!

I go into society
I try hard an activity
Not to slander in any room
I offer that act as a bloom
Unto Your lotus feet!

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Christopher Lee 27 November 2009

bhavanthi namrastharavaha phalaghamair navaambhubhirdhooravilaambhinoa dhanaaha anudhdhathaaha sathpurushaaha samrudhdhibhihi swabhava aevaisha paroapakaarinaam with the bearing of fruits trees bow down clouds hang down lower and lower for giving water good persons on getting prosperity do not become arrogant....this alone is the nature of benevolent persons before reading your this poem i was writing to my close friend about social services; i was surprised....wonders happen in Anbe Sivam the hero completes...Life is full of miracles and surprises.... great poem...touched me

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 November 2009

very nice. very deep.........

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Catrina Heart 27 November 2009

I offer that act as a bloom Unto Your lotus feet! ---- lovely ending...great poem indeed! ! !

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Raman Savithiri

Raman Savithiri

Coimbatore, Tamil Nadu, India
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