Ben mcelfresh

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7 Months - Poem by Ben mcelfresh

7 Months have passed
Since we became one
9 Months have passed
Since i fell in love with you

Getting closer to that one year
Falling deeper in love everyday
Finding more and more happiness as the days pass
Knowing I found my one true love

A few hard times have come our way
No way to prevent those times
But we made it through together
All because of the love we share

I'll often look back at that time
I'll cry at the thought of losing you
Even for those few nights
I had died inside

And when i look at that message afterwards
I see how close i was to losing you
But i cry even more
I cry because you told me i was your 'one'

You're the girl i want to spend my life with
You're the girl i'd walk a thousand miles through hell for
You're the girl i'd give my life for
You're the girl i love more than anything in this world
And Baby....that will NEVER change!


Comments about 7 Months by Ben mcelfresh

  • Ruth RaymentRuth Rayment (3/18/2012 2:07:00 AM)

    This is lovely... a true romantic Ben... you realli are x well done keep writing and that break into the publishing world will come by soon enough. (Report)Reply

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  • Untitiled and unnamed (11/30/2007 9:02:00 PM)

    Nice..I liked this alot, well done... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 30, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 27, 2011


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