Wednesday, October 8, 2014

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Rating: 3.5

You picked up my heart carelessly
and, with a needle and thread
your shaking hands
decided which path you'd take
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Laura Milner
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Khairul Ahsan 08 October 2014

Sad! Loved the caption. The poem expresses the feelings well enough to be understood by all.

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 October 2014

nice drop.loved its flow and simplicity.

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Laura Milner

Laura Milner

Manchester
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