890. When You Whispered In Mine Ears.. Poem by V F

890. When You Whispered In Mine Ears..

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smiling away the evening with you
is a beautiful memory I'v deep inside me filed
gazing into your love filled eyes
as you strove to bring the laugther back in mine

watching the birds on the lake bobbing along
as we paddled together you and I
feeling the breeze caress us together
as the sun in the far distance sighed

the lap of water on the side of our boat
as you gently held my hand in yours
caressing so softly my face and hair
every movement filled with sweet love

but my lexis deserts me as I endeavour
to articulate the sensations that churned
when you delved deep into my soul
and holding your heart in your eyes
whispered the words that it was me you loved..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.Amit K Biswas 20 April 2009

Those were beautiful moments of yours, very elegantly expressed. Wish you many more such moments in the coming days. Thanks for sharing your joy with us.

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