A Better Place Poem by Denise Girod

A Better Place

Rating: 4.3


How grand would it be
to live completely happy and free
to know that tomorrow will always appear
with all who you love and hold very dear

This is not the world we live in today
to many people are trying to block the way
to those of us who want to live
in a world where Faith, will outlive

Believing, trusting and following Gods way
will bring us to a better place to stay
Not only would we find a better place to live in
the healing of our world would finally begin

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 15 November 2006

A beautiful flow to this one Denise, There is no greater way than Gods way, all would be wise to try and follow Love duncan X

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Tracey Collins 06 November 2006

Amen to that...we do need A better place to live in.....and we need Gods help...

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