A Bird Poem by PRAFULL SHILEDAR

A Bird

Rating: 3.0

As you were sitting near the window
For the birds arriving from distant country

Your voice gently settled
On the branch of the tree in front

A bird arrived from the sky
And settled on the same branch

It once again gave back
Your own voice to you

You didn't realize
What had happened

You are singing
Along with the bird

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(Translation by Santosh Bhoomkar)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We are transformed unknowingly.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 04 September 2023

This poem may have 'lost something' when translated, but I enjoyed it. 3 stars in its English form. ;) bri

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PRAFULL SHILEDAR 13 September 2023

Thanks dear Bri Edwards! Yes, something is always lost in translation.

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Bri Edwards 04 September 2023

Your title A Bird attracted me. Such a 'simple' title is easy to remember, but may not be as alluring as one more 'complicated'. On this site, entering....a bird, ...A Bird, or...'A bird' onto its Search Anything line gives 313 poems! !

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PRAFULL SHILEDAR 13 September 2023

ohh...313 poems is quiet a big number. Hope they differ in content and expression. Regards.

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Bri Edwards 04 September 2023

re (regarding) your Poet's Notes, Was something/someone 'transformed' in the poem? bri ;)

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PRAFULL SHILEDAR 13 September 2023

Yes. We get transformed unknowingly. Our voice goes away from us, it is given back by the bird, we again start singing. All happens unknowingly. 'A Bird' notices it.

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