A Couple Poem by vamsi krishna

A Couple

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A couple sat in front of me
full of life and laughter
they caressed each other
like two children searching
for some unkown stuff
in a dark room

Full of naughtiness and brightness
thier smiles and every move had
a story foretold 'they were in LOVE'

laughter had mischief and
touch a touch of sensitivity
but their words were secritive
audible to no one but themselves

they were behaving like kids
and laughing at absolutely notheing
as i passed by
i saw the cupid laughing on his seccess
and the devil crying at his failure
and then i wished tht the devil could be killed
and cupid ruled hearts the i belive
this worl would e a mch better place to live in



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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mona Martinez 15 July 2009

awww! ! ! that was well written. that is so true when you observe it. well said.

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Kesav Easwaran 07 July 2009

good work Aryan...love is great...the joy it gives out is contageous, no doubt...thanks...10

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Surya . 07 July 2009

sure love makes all the difference. voted10 surya

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