Saturday, October 11, 2014

A Day At The Beach Comments

Rating: 4.3

Sun glistening ocean and waves so grand

The laughter of children playing in the sand.
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Joan Averso
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Hans Vr 11 October 2014

Superb poem, the beach has really something magic. Recently a good friend of mine expressed his awe as follows: Can you imagine the great vastness of the oceans and our Creator does not even let us drink a sip of it! Good rhymes, good rhythm. Keep on writing.

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Chinedu Dike 11 October 2014

A typical happy day at the beach well depicted. A lovely piece well penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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