A Door Of Roar Of Success Poem by Nilay Vyas

A Door Of Roar Of Success

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I don't know how it became,
its all about luck when it came.
It may change my wife's life,
Who know maybe from my car to knife.

I don't know how I adopted it,
now it makes me also think where should I sit.
Now there is no limit of joy,
Of course more than getting a toy.

I don't care about my attitude,
may some take as rude or gratitude.
Its my ticket to all things bright,
really an awesome sight.

I shouldn't think about the lottery it may go,
leaving me say NO, NO, NO.
My friends will never leave me,
and be happy in what they see.

Now I wont think about their wish,
Really after winning the lottery I am SELFISH.

A Door Of Roar Of Success
Sunday, August 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: success
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For making us all remember about our friends.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dorukhan Baris Oguzcan 19 August 2017

A nice depiction of good And evil, What may a great change reveal about people And their perception against someone how it evolves after an upheavel, like the consrasting between last four lines.

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Nilay Vyas 24 August 2017

Thanks BLACK SHELF

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Rajnish Manga 14 August 2017

Meeting of minds, souls and hearts of true lovers is the moment of a unique celebration. Everything else is secondary. Thanks for this amazing presentation, Nilay. Now there is no limit of joy, Its my ticket to all things bright,

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Nilay Vyas 15 August 2017

Thanks

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