Its the sail to Fairy tale
seeing the whale.
everywhere its Princess,
with her very beautiful dress.
All things are possible here,
Lions can be deer.
there are cities of Castles and Fort,
No need of Resort.
There are cursed witches,
eating sandwiches.
All miracles happen in twelve,
and all are delve.
A beautiful dream of a peace loving human, a nice use of words and lines. Congrats.
Wow! Landscape of a wonderland with all kinds of fancied creatures having powers of metamorphosis. Thanks a lot.
A higly imaginative poem nicely executed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
Princess with beautiful dress wonders mind of many. Lion can be deer. All impossible things can be possible here. A great fairy-tale is presented here with nice imagery. An excellent poem is very well drafted. This is a perfect poem chosen as the poem of the day. CONGRATULATIONS! ...10
Congrats, once again, many good and bad happens in the welve months of a year and it is remembered as if we have read twelve chapters of a fairy tale.
When I see poems from a different culture and linguistical structure not in tune to certain districts, I try to put myself on the foreign soil of the poetic page and dialect of the poet, the diversity in poetry is a beautiful thing, so my friend, be proud! You reached for the enchantment of a child’s pallet and you accomplished this! Pay no attention to the old snobs...be proud!
WOW! A poem for children, beautifully worded, Nilay! Congratulations with the choice of Poem Hunter Com as Member Poem Of The Day, a great surprise! I have enjoyed a very lot this lovely poem. A 10+++++++ GBU in Abundance, Amen.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
With your imagination and your pen Nilay you can create wonderful things. Keep imagining and keep writing....!
Hope will