Nilay Vyas

A Great Sail To Fairytale - Poem by Nilay Vyas

Its the sail to Fairy tale
seeing the whale.
everywhere its Princess,
with her very beautiful dress.

All things are possible here,
Lions can be deer.
there are cities of Castles and Fort,
No need of Resort.

There are cursed witches,
eating sandwiches.
All miracles happen in twelve,
and all are delve.

Topic(s) of this poem: fairy tale

Form: Horatian Ode

Poet's Notes about The Poem

For children's mainly small girls.

Comments about A Great Sail To Fairytale by Nilay Vyas

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/19/2018 11:14:00 PM)

    A higly imaginative poem nicely executed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day. (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/19/2018 11:05:00 PM)

    Princess with beautiful dress wonders mind of many. Lion can be deer. All impossible things can be possible here. A great fairy-tale is presented here with nice imagery. An excellent poem is very well drafted. This is a perfect poem chosen as the poem of the day. CONGRATULATIONS! ...10 (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (8/19/2018 8:18:00 PM)

    Congrats, once again, many good and bad happens in the welve months of a year and it is remembered as if we have read twelve chapters of a fairy tale. (Report) Reply

  • Bill Cantrell (8/19/2018 8:10:00 PM)

    When I see poems from a different culture and linguistical structure not in tune to certain districts, I try to put myself on the foreign soil of the poetic page and dialect of the poet, the diversity in poetry is a beautiful thing, so my friend, be proud! You reached for the enchantment of a child’s pallet and you accomplished this! Pay no attention to the old proud! (Report) Reply

  • Sylvia Frances Chan (8/19/2018 7:44:00 AM)

    WOW! A poem for children, beautifully worded, Nilay! Congratulations with the choice of Poem Hunter Com as Member Poem Of The Day, a great surprise! I have enjoyed a very lot this lovely poem. A 10+++++++ GBU in Abundance, Amen. (Report) Reply

  • Fiadh Fida (8/19/2018 6:53:00 AM)

    All miracles happen in twelve,
    and all are delve.
    in a fairy tale something more and more may
    easily happen,
    (Report) Reply

  • Riza Braholli (8/19/2018 6:41:00 AM)

    great fantasy... congrats poet by riza (Report) Reply

  • Mahtab Bangalee (8/19/2018 5:14:00 AM)

    Fairy tale- oh ho ho tail of fairness of doing anything!

    good penned

    //// good choice as poem of the day
    (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (8/19/2018 5:09:00 AM)

    All things are possible here! !

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
    (Report) Reply

  • Lantz Pierre (8/19/2018 3:35:00 AM)

    This horrible bit of dribble again? Again? ! ! ? ? Why? Sometimes this site is so ridiculous. (Report) Reply

  • Nilay Vyas (8/19/2018 3:34:00 AM)

    Sorry for misunderstanding I myself has written this poem, Thanks all for such wonderful comments (Report) Reply

  • (8/19/2018 2:57:00 AM)

    A poem like history it repeats itself and the fairytale carries on? .........words wisely written by Nilay, s son! (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (8/19/2018 1:29:00 AM)

    Its the sail to Fairy tale
    seeing the whale.
    everywhere its Princess,
    with her very beautiful dress..reminded of Dysney land......... your imagination is powerful. write and write making the best use of your talents.. thank u dear poet. congrats for POD
    (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (8/19/2018 12:48:00 AM)

    Such a pretty fairy tale Horatian Ode... congrats, Nilay for being chosen for the day....10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (8/19/2017 11:50:00 PM)

    Wow! Landscape of a wonderland with all kinds of fancied creatures having powers of metamorphosis. Thanks a lot. (Report) Reply

    Nilay Vyas (8/24/2017 7:38:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot

  • Akhtar Jawad (8/19/2017 10:03:00 PM)

    A beautiful dream of a peace loving human, a nice use of words and lines. Congrats. (Report) Reply

    Nilay Vyas (8/24/2017 7:39:00 AM)

    Merci Akhtar Jawad

  • Savita Tyagi (8/19/2017 4:08:00 PM)

    Loved it! Went back to my childhood listening fairly tale from ma! (Report) Reply

    Nilay Vyas (8/24/2017 7:41:00 AM)

    This means a lot to me thx

  • (8/19/2017 1:33:00 PM)

    very imaginative..brings back childlike visions... (Report) Reply

    Nilay Vyas (8/24/2017 7:42:00 AM)


  • Rini Shibu (8/19/2017 10:26:00 AM)

    Lovely poems for kids (Report) Reply

  • Lantz Pierre (8/19/2017 10:19:00 AM)

    This is a terribly weak effort. The cadence is unbalanced by rhymes that don't go anywhere, the grammar and diction are both atrocious and then finally, what the heck is a delve, anyway? (Report) Reply

    Nilay Vyas (8/24/2017 10:30:00 AM)

    thank you for your kind comment and suggestions, it's written by my son who is still 11 years old and I will pass your feedback to him and i am sure he will improve it in coming days

    (8/19/2017 1:31:00 PM)

    If he added a D to delve changing it to delved it would have worked..

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 13, 2017

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