A Great Sail To Fairytale Poem by Nilay Vyas

A Great Sail To Fairytale

Rating: 4.7


Its the sail to Fairy tale
seeing the whale.
everywhere its Princess,
with her very beautiful dress.

All things are possible here,
Lions can be deer.
there are cities of Castles and Fort,
No need of Resort.

There are cursed witches,
eating sandwiches.
All miracles happen in twelve,
and all are delve.

A Great Sail To Fairytale
Sunday, August 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: fairy tale
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For children's mainly small girls.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoffrey Fafard 19 August 2017

With your imagination and your pen Nilay you can create wonderful things. Keep imagining and keep writing....!

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Nilay Vyas 24 August 2017

Hope will

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Akhtar Jawad 19 August 2017

A beautiful dream of a peace loving human, a nice use of words and lines. Congrats.

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Nilay Vyas 24 August 2017

Merci Akhtar Jawad

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Rajnish Manga 19 August 2017

Wow! Landscape of a wonderland with all kinds of fancied creatures having powers of metamorphosis. Thanks a lot.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 August 2018

A higly imaginative poem nicely executed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 August 2018

Princess with beautiful dress wonders mind of many. Lion can be deer. All impossible things can be possible here. A great fairy-tale is presented here with nice imagery. An excellent poem is very well drafted. This is a perfect poem chosen as the poem of the day. CONGRATULATIONS! ...10

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Akhtar Jawad 19 August 2018

Congrats, once again, many good and bad happens in the welve months of a year and it is remembered as if we have read twelve chapters of a fairy tale.

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Bill Cantrell 19 August 2018

When I see poems from a different culture and linguistical structure not in tune to certain districts, I try to put myself on the foreign soil of the poetic page and dialect of the poet, the diversity in poetry is a beautiful thing, so my friend, be proud! You reached for the enchantment of a child’s pallet and you accomplished this! Pay no attention to the old snobs...be proud!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 August 2018

WOW! A poem for children, beautifully worded, Nilay! Congratulations with the choice of Poem Hunter Com as Member Poem Of The Day, a great surprise! I have enjoyed a very lot this lovely poem. A 10+++++++ GBU in Abundance, Amen.

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