Tuesday, July 20, 2010

A Dream Of Us Comments

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I found you in a cold place.
You were hurt when I took you in.
And fell into your abounding grace.
Now I dont want this to end.
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Justin Hendricks
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Emma Adamyan 21 July 2010

i liked this one juz like 'I wait for u', but what i wanted to say, if u change the 'furniture' toward positive, a bit... it will become a perfect poetry and a perfect love! ur too young to give ur chances to another. hold them all

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loNeLY AnGel 20 July 2010

Beautiful poem............................................

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loNeLY AnGel 20 July 2010

beautiful poem..............................

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Justin Hendricks

Justin Hendricks

Winston salem, NC
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