A Dreamful Night Poem by Saurabh Deosarkar

A Dreamful Night

Rating: 5.0


A Dreamful night

A night in a Rome
like a girl in chrome
It was December
I still remember...

Came in imagination,
and stopped my narration
she smiled in delightful way
as daffodils on the bay...

A chill in the moonlight
So cold was that night,
I removed my jacket
to make her protect

Passed in her embrace
so close that I could count...
every freckle on her face

She smiled in a controversy
about my fantasy...
In the duration
to continue my imagination...

My lovely dream
Was like a chocolate cream
But it shattered
With a hammer so battered...

ALAS! !
My dream was passed
and my lifetime so crossed
Made me depressed…

And I cried in vain
for she never comes again...

- Saurabh Deosarkar

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 23 October 2011

Amazing! This write filled with great imagery and rhymes has become your stepping stone that will lead you into the Poetry World, dear Saurabh! Your great poetic talent is so clearly shown through this well penned and poignant write that you must keep it up! 10+++ Well deserved! I honestly like your strength and potential shown in this fantastic, rich in imagery and fine texture write! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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