A Fish In A Bowl Poem by auty paul jason

A Fish In A Bowl

Rating: 5.0


They don't lock me up
They thought they safe me.
What is the meaning of life
When I can't even move my fan
Maybe just maybe, I'm in the ocean
Or
Maybe I'm loosing my mind
Thought about it and think about it
And
I miss where I born.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 23 December 2009

Symbolically yes, sometimes life feels like a fish in a bowl. Nice poem, auty. Keep writing. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Joseph Poewhit 22 December 2009

Reminded me of a goldfish in one of those round small bowls at a carnival. [ 3 ping pong balls for a quarter ]

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