auty paul jason

Rookie (10.7.1988 / Myanmar)

A Fish In A Bowl - Poem by auty paul jason

They don't lock me up
They thought they safe me.
What is the meaning of life
When I can't even move my fan
Maybe just maybe, I'm in the ocean
Or
Maybe I'm loosing my mind
Thought about it and think about it
And
I miss where I born.


Comments about A Fish In A Bowl by auty paul jason

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (12/23/2009 8:09:00 AM)


    Symbolically yes, sometimes life feels like a fish in a bowl. Nice poem, auty. Keep writing. Best Wishes.

    Naseer
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  • (12/22/2009 6:50:00 AM)


    Reminded me of a goldfish in one of those round small bowls at a carnival. [ 3 ping pong balls for a quarter ] (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 22, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 11, 2010


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