It is ego that is sharper than knife.
Beware of it or it can shatter life.
It's a foe dwelling in us.
Stay away from making fuss.
Husband or wife, love more to lessen strife...!
© Devanshu patel
07/31/2019
u sir r such a wonderful poet it will be a privilege if you stroll along my pages
An amazing limerick imbued with wisdom and insight. Yes, ego has the face of an evil that can kill a beautiful life. Great rhyme throughout this well penned poem.
I am glad my limerick has inspired you to write another splendid limerick! You are absolutely right Devanshu! False ego can create more problems in family life than many other issues! There won't be an attitude of forgiveness if both the husband and wife think.... 'I am better '! If ego can be forsaken, life will be smoother!
I liked your limerick, and the accompanying poster, Devanshu.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ego, a four-fold lethal whip, Destroying Relationship, Well-writ dear Devanshu