The last line should say patient instead of patience unless of course the author spoke the words in that form with some intent. Sort of cliche imagery, but not to bad. easily identifiable cause we have all had that nightmare at some point in our lives.
Thank you Kay. I hadn't realized the patient instead of patience. As you can see I did take your advice and change it, it simply makes more sense. My poems have only been seen by a few friends, so it is always nice to be able to take new points of view into consideration.
~Kimberly~
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The last line should say patient instead of patience unless of course the author spoke the words in that form with some intent. Sort of cliche imagery, but not to bad. easily identifiable cause we have all had that nightmare at some point in our lives.
Thank you Kay. I hadn't realized the patient instead of patience. As you can see I did take your advice and change it, it simply makes more sense. My poems have only been seen by a few friends, so it is always nice to be able to take new points of view into consideration. ~Kimberly~