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A Good Poem

Rating: 5.0

is like a bullet that goes
straight to the heart

life and death on the line

immortality
but a short breath away.


(Previously published in The Hold, March 2004)

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Walterrean Salley 26 July 2012

A poem either grabs you, or it doesn’t. You can feel a good poem immediately, as it touches the heart. And it stays with you forever. Good writing.

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R H 23 April 2006

This is definitely 'a good poem' Laurence. Kind regards, Justine.

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***** ********* 20 April 2006

Yes yes yes! lol Perfect shot Laurence! Walking wounded! still smiling....off to bath them! bubble bubble Tai

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