is like a bullet that goes
straight to the heart
life and death on the line
immortality
but a short breath away.
(Previously published in The Hold, March 2004)
Yes yes yes! lol Perfect shot Laurence! Walking wounded! still smiling....off to bath them! bubble bubble Tai
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A poem either grabs you, or it doesn’t. You can feel a good poem immediately, as it touches the heart. And it stays with you forever. Good writing.