Ravi Sathasivam


A Great Soldier Yet To Be Seen..... - Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

The day when I met you
Your attitude impressed me in my mind and heart
You are known to everyone as a great yesterday
soldier for our country.
You were distinguished soldier, an officer,
a man among men.
You are the most valuable gift for our country
Your contribution to the World War II is unforgettable.
Your Knowledge on military is a precious gift for
our young soldiers.
You loved our country and you did the best for her.
Today, you are away from us, living by yourself
Your marched forward legs are stands still today.
You be the best what ever you are and where ever you are.
But the love you have shown on us will
cherish in our heart forever.
As bible says LOVE is patient and kind
and let that faith surround you.
You are a great soldier for the all time
and yet to be seen


Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright ©2004 Ravi Sathasivam


Comments about A Great Soldier Yet To Be Seen..... by Ravi Sathasivam

  • (6/8/2010 7:06:00 AM)


    Yes Sir… Yes Sir… Yes Sir…

    I’m a soldier …destined for country …and also citizen …

    A fighter …for the country…
    10/10+
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (5/18/2010 12:08:00 AM)


    To be ultermost sincere, it is a great poem of appriciation. (Report) Reply

  • (11/7/2009 8:09:00 AM)


    A intolerable pain marched into heart. This should be dedicated to all soldiers who kissed their eternity in some cause during the wars that world tasted. Impressive poem (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/21/2009 6:25:00 AM)


    As bible says LOVE is patient and kind
    and let that faith surround you.
    You are a great soldier for the all time
    and yet to be seen....means pioneer position even in Holdy book and their destination is to be seen heven i.e. martyrdom...... beautiful write...

    Read mine 'Martyres'
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  • (6/8/2009 5:01:00 AM)


    Hello sir,
    'As bible says LOVE is patient and kind
    and let that faith surround you.
    You are a great soldier for the all time
    and yet to be seen'

    see sir..you know what is the best weapon for a soldier...is it AK47...Dragnov or Hand Grande....no sir...soldiers best weapon is love......
    and that's what i ment/// and i feel you v bought it out perfectly...this is a great tribute a great soldier indeed...
    god bless him

    regards
    with love shan
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  • Sandra Martyres (4/14/2009 12:47:00 AM)


    A well deserved tribute to a soldier...nicely written (Report) Reply

  • (8/7/2008 8:02:00 AM)


    a great tribute, well deserved indeed (Report) Reply

  • (8/3/2008 8:38:00 PM)


    a well written tribute! archana (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 18, 2004



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