Monday, April 12, 2010

A Heartbroken Facade Comments

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Who are you?
Who am I?
Who are the people we're trying desperately to deny?
Are you a king?
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Tondalaya Jefferson
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Lynn Glover 13 April 2010

I love this poem and the way you have put the rhythem into the verses. Broken hearts seem to come naturally these days, but you're young and will have many more lovers before the real thing comes along. Good Luck, Your friend Lynn I rate your poem a ten mainly because of the rhythemic lines.

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