Sunday, July 21, 2019

A Hellish Time Comments

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Seeing the bars
My heart was trembling.
The man beside him knew us.
His ugly laughing face reminded me of every grave mistakes that I committed.
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Bidisha Sharaf
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Dr Antony Theodore 04 February 2020

Seeing the bars My heart was trembling. I wanted to run away from the evil. The evil did not lie in me, it was my decision. Those urges were of no use that I wrote for people. very fine poem. you have poretic sense in you. please dont stop writing poems. to be a well known poetess is your call. tony

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 July 2019

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 July 2019

I wanted to run away from the evil. The evil did not lie in me, it was my decision.../// superbly written; like it

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