Wednesday, March 19, 2008

A Humble Mumble Comments

Rating: 5.0

</>Pebbles in my path
stubbles on my chin
mindsets i cannot change
keep me on a stumble
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tom thump
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Mary Gordley 20 March 2008

You caught me with the title and the poem delivers a lot in a clear and precise form. Success in an economy of syllables. Thanks.

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