A Hymn For Our New Year: 2016 Ce Poem by Daniel Brick

A Hymn For Our New Year: 2016 Ce

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As if the bloom of flowers lasted
into the next dry season, as if summer's
warmth embraced autumn's chill, as if
our union stretched across vast prairies.

As if everything we knew as reality shifted
and handy dandy we knew it all as fantasy.
As if we became guardians of all the dreams
when they slowly swelled into awakened being.

As if saints and sanctuaries were commonplace.
As if virtues smothered vices, and people,
released from the weight of sin, light-hearted and
light-headed, joined the circle dance of the spheres.

As if every language became language of the heart,
as if every heart spoke only truth to other hearts,
as if truth bonded heart to heart in everlasting amity.
As if we were persuaded this world is a Paradise-Garden -

Because we made it so, by turning AS IF into IT IS.

Wednesday, December 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: spirituality,vision
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 09 January 2018

As if every language became language of the heart, as if every heart spoke only truth to other hearts, as if truth bonded heart to heart in everlasting amity. As if we were persuaded this world is a Paradise-Garden - Because we made it so, by turning AS IF into IT IS. - - - - It is such a beautiful poem which affirms our ability to make the world more beautiful..

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Bharati Nayak 07 July 2016

As if the bloom of flowers lasted into the next dry season, as summer's warmth embraced Autumn's chill - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - As if we were persuaded this world is a Paradise -Garden Because we made it so, by turning AS IF into IT IS.

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Bharati Nayak 04 November 2016

The title of the poem attracted me while browsing through your poems.I am revisiting this poem.When you wrote this poem, you were halfway through 2016.Now this year is nearing to end and 2017 will come after two months.As you said, it is really nice to dream of things getting better.Your poem fills me with lovely feelings as if many dreams have become reality.

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Daniel Brick 07 July 2016

Do you have the custom of making a resolution for the New Year? People don't take these resolutions seriously, it's just a game. But this poem is a series of positive events and attitudes. We're half way through the new year. I don't know if any have come true, but it's nice to dream of things getting better.

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