A Kiss Rejected On A Whim Poem by Doris Cornago

A Kiss Rejected On A Whim



The sigh of a whisper echoes in the mind's stillness
A quivering drop from an empty cup suspended
You and me in a slow motion skirmishing
With words, motives unknown like
Flagellation of skin with cuts
Deeply sears the spirit
Frowns line my
Brows
Wrinkles
Upon the brim
Full lips poised on
A kiss rejected on a whim
A punishment is what you think
Yet he flounders in knee deep waters
Unable to help himself, sadly depreciated
Demotivated by downturns, triggered by runs
Unwilling, unwhorling, unconcerned, but undefeated
Embrace him with all, thank the gods you are his keeper

A Kiss Rejected On A Whim
Monday, December 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: disease,kiss,love and life,mental illness,rejection
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When you love someone, you bear with all his inconsistencies and inconveniences. Don't ever think that love is all smooth and pleasant, it's a chastisement of the flesh, a flagellation of the exuberant spirit. It's not selfishness, but selflessness, that elevates love above all emotions.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Doris Cornago 18 December 2017

Mental illness is something we dare not talk about openly for fear of being branded. Yet, it's very real for some of us, among our friends, in our families and sadly, inside our bedrooms. You would think that violence is the worst a man can inflict on a woman, but think again. Isn't inattentiveness or abandonment more pernicious?

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Doris Cornago 18 December 2017

Observe my duality in this poem, the one outside who is played by the selfish man, and the one inside, the humane core who understands and forgives all. We all have this duality and it's up to us to cultivate that part which is kind and gentle.

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Doris Cornago 18 December 2017

When you seek romance, you are slapped with the truth, none can be taken from a cloistered monk.: -)

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Jette Blackstone 18 December 2017

All of your images are perched on the precipice of something....a letting go of restraint. Undefeated, the speaker does not give up. Thanks for sharing.

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Doris Cornago 18 December 2017

Thank you, Jette. You are my mind's reflection.

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Doris Cornago 18 December 2017

Here is the romance: a quivering drop suspended from an empty cup's rim. You live for the promise of it but there's nothing there - he is empty.

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