Sun
shines
directly
in my eyes
Blinding me
Angelic halos
winking eerily
Bedazzled mind
Mesmerizing hot
Sweet turpidity
Sedate facade's
a mirage in the
fading light of
the hot desert
Shimmers heat
Egos deflate
Regurgitate
Pallbearer
marching
Boxed
in
Yes, Kostas. It lacks a deep masculine voice - yours. Thank you for looking at the mirage. :)
Angelic halos winking eerily Egos deflate........ warning against the shimmer that blinds. know the real person in the darkest hours of his or her life. loving unconditionally is our call in a marital relationship........ very good poem.. you have illustrated this noble idea which such a great example of the blinding light...... thank u. tony
Thank you for this visit. I am always delighted to have a fellow poet look into the deeper meaning of my poems with me in the same way that I like looking into something that they have seen and expressing the view in a poem. Come back soon, Dr. Tony.
Our hopes dim as our energies flicker, and so, we cannot just allow ourselves to be carried out in a box to fertilize the soil; bravely, let your voices be heard, today is the day for poems, there are no scheduled tomorrows. With my apology to RMS for the lengthy explanations.
Ang sinag ng araw sa aking mga mata'y Pagbubunyag Wari'y anghel Purong busilak Ako'y isang aba Palaging taranta Maamong mukha Taliwas sa anghang Isa kang malikmata pakupas na liwanag Ningas ng disyerto Nawawalan ng init ang pagkakaibigan Kahambugan ay nakakasuklam Eto sepulturero nagmamartsa dala ang kahon na Malikmata Filipino translation
Sol brilla derecho en mis ojos Cegándome Halos angeles Parpadeando misteriosamente Impresionable Hipnotizante Dulce turpidez Fachada sedada un espejismo en desvanecimiento la luz del desierto llameante todo La pasión decae Ego desinflado Regurgitar Sepulcro de marcha lleva el caja Un Espejismo My Spanish translation of the poem
Doris, such an excellent write....10+++++++
It's an honest estimation of our life cycle, defined by relationships, Thank you for your appreciation and visit. :)