This is just right. You create an image that reflects your deepest self and let that image carry your meaning to the reader. No expression of self pity, just the truth as you see. This may be too brief to be considered a poem, but it
suggests far more than is printed by you. You trust your readers to fill in with their own thoughts. So the comments they leave on this page will flesh out the poem.
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This is just right. You create an image that reflects your deepest self and let that image carry your meaning to the reader. No expression of self pity, just the truth as you see. This may be too brief to be considered a poem, but it suggests far more than is printed by you. You trust your readers to fill in with their own thoughts. So the comments they leave on this page will flesh out the poem.