A Little Bird's Message Poem by Tara Chettur

A Little Bird's Message

Rating: 5.0


Iam a little bird, I can offer you happiness,
There are no classes you need to attend,
You don’t have to go to park and laugh out loud,
You don’t have to sit for years of medidation,
You will not be given any book to read,
You will not be asked to change your religion,
Iam not like human, iam not here to preach,
I can give you what I have unconditionally.

You take my wings and fly high,
Shed your pride and don’t cry,
Listen to my song and you will loose your weight,
Don’t Panic, Iam here to cheer,
these fluttering voices are of my wings,
Look! How fearlessly I move around the clouds,
Iam a tiny tot and I know only to give,
Iam happy because I don’t expect anything.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 07 January 2009

‘...take my wings and fly high, shed your pride and don’t cry’... catchy line...true and wise is this little bird’s message that 'flies' beautifully in well framed lines...10

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Raj Arumugam 03 May 2009

a lovely poem that evokes values civilizations forget

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Mayur Soni 12 December 2009

good work and great observation, its really true that there's a inspiration in every creation of god.

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Subroto Chatterjee 09 August 2009

The last line of the poem....is a clincher! ! Dropping expectations is one of the biggest problems for humans. Having expectations almost always bring frustrations.... So, keep flying, little bird... Cheers. Subroto

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Ted M 09 July 2009

This is a beautiful piece. The birds can show us how we can be really happy.

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Afzal Shauq 27 June 2009

Listen to my song and you will loose your weight, Don’t Panic, Iam here to cheer, these fluttering voices are of my wings, wonderful and richly written poem.. the above lines /verses are very sweet to read and feel.. the visionary effect is impressive, heart feeling and some time brain knocking... well done..10++++++++++++++

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a lovely poem...i wrote one 'a simple song'...please read...i take this into my favs for its content

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