A Little Bit More Poem by Maria Moll

A Little Bit More

Rating: 3.9


The hat you wore on your head
The jacket I once wore, red
A moment spent in a boiler room
The beginning an internal doom
Crossing the fine lines between reality and dream
Completely in harmony, or so it seemed
Older you are
Attending the bars
Shooting the pool
Breaking the rules
Mature I am
Be better I can
In true love
Hence these feelings I must shove
The bites, the gentle nudges, the drawings in a script
In the end I know that, a little, both our hearts did rip
Nonetheless we will never part
I can assure a piece of my heart,
You...do...own.
One no one else will have
Your feelings to me you've shown
Star crossed thinkers we'll always be
Your hat and you, my jacket and me
Maybe one day, maybe...but until then
A lil' bit mo' man, A Little Bit More

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suicide King 09 January 2008

How to comment this poem *as the boy looks at the screen and breathes hard * Theres so much I want to say, ....So much I want to say. I'm going MAD I...I...I think you've said it all. 'A little more Maria, a little more'...(M+A+D ^.~ M+A+D) *the boy touches the screen with his fingers and bites his lower lip*

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Suicide King 22 March 2008

lol i wonder how many times I've read this same poem... i wonder how many times...

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Suicide King 06 April 2008

...to think I use this poem as an excuse to remeber you, every time I want to think of you I turn on my computer and I run to this poem...just to read it over...just to read the words...just to try and hold on...

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Suicide King 10 September 2008

I miss my lil vamp lol

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Suicide King 05 September 2008

... I miss you... 'but break my heart for I must hold my tongue' i would give anything to see you now, to hold you, just to have ur lips kiss my forehead... I never stop loving you Maria. (I never will) *_~

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Suicide King 08 June 2008

Is-it-wrong-that-i-miss-you.......idk-lol

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Suicide King 21 April 2008

A lil bit more maria................SK

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Hannah M 14 April 2008

I love this poem, it's so magificent and real!

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