Saturday, September 28, 2013

A Little Sadness Comments

Rating: 4.7

Reflecting on my life
at the end of the week
a tear leaves my eye
caresses my cheek
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Khairul Ahsan 25 November 2013

A sweet, beautiful poem with deep thoughts. Liked it. Please replace all the capitals by small letters except at the beginning of the lines. The poem would look better that way.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 28 September 2013

Beautiful poem, every line has depth of truthfulness, truly a lovely write.

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