A Lonely Struggle Poem by J.P. Strauss

A Lonely Struggle

Rating: 5.0


Trapped with thoughts inside my head
Little terrors that I dread
Darkness seeks to claim my mind
I search in hope for a light to find
I dare not tell I dare share
Even with those I know who'd care
So alone I sit with the world behind
Fighting terrors inside my mind

Monday, October 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,suicide,trapped
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 11 October 2016

An insightful depiction of loss of sunshine is one's - the deplorable condition of life at its lowest ebb, well articulated and nicely penned in beautiful rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing J.P. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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