A Look Within Poem by Sensuelle Briden
A Look Within
If you live all socially, you don’t feel your nature.
If you’re afraid of others, I’d say they truly get you.
If you don’t give love to yourself you’ll have a hole in
Your inner space; so it’s nothing but falling.
When the world is rolling and it goes to nowhere,
If you look within – that’s what would be fair.
As there’s nothing which exists separately.
If you don’t realize this, you will sometime later.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 4:39:20 PM # 1.0.0.1119
This is indeed a very emphatic call. It is generally overdue but an essential one. A quote from your poem says it in unequivocal terms: If you don’t give love to yourself you’ll have a hole in / Your inner space; so it’s nothing but falling.
I want to specify something: so I used the wrong word combination? If you meant that, I know I can do that as I am not living exactly in the English-speaking place now. That's why I may have some weird combnations. But in this case I always appreciate people to tell me so I can remember that. If I understood well, please tell me how I should say what I said incorrectly. And I guess you liked the poem, am I right?