A Lost Love Poem by Dennis Lange

A Lost Love

Rating: 5.0


How could she love me like the wind -
So touch my face, and make it bend
To her, and then soon disappear
On backs of white-tailed leaping deer?

As quickly as a norther blows
O'er prairie land, and never slows,
And ripples wheat like ocean waves,
She stirred my soul; she made me slave

To her, to wind, that travels on.
And after all the breeze has blown,
And all the leaves and flags are free,
Alone I stand in slavery.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Achill Lad 04 October 2014

And ripples wheat like the ocean wave, She stirred my soul; made me her slave A beautiful little poem. May I suggest you alter the last two lines of the second verse slightly. Hope you don't mind me saying this.

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Christian Hudak 07 June 2014

Beautiful poem! ! ! Very well written

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