Remember the night we met each other for the first time.The way you were looking at me was more than sweet couldn t resist seemed like dream that is becoming reality, but things got change when she came.You have told me that she is a back story, but you lied to me...got back to her and left me alone...
I know there is no more for me to do cuz you with her, but if i would ask you to come back to me would you do it?
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a good love letter t the one who relates to your heart...the composition of words and the way you did it is really impressive and full of love and feelings are speaking... got a language to talk.. best 10++++++
Yeahhh sure you need your boo Aida.Go run to him baby.Nice writes Aida.
thats a fantastic style of writing, this is really a jungle where new tech...s are invented, oother wise keep this up, lookin forward to the second one ope it shall be divided in pragraphs so it could attract readers...................
When the heart is on fire for someone of such great desire it is very hard to put that love intrest out of mind.Great way to capture the most fascinating spark of life.I gave you a ten for capturing that intense and inescapable raptured feeling....(technical aspects like typos and spelling can always be corrected) .Good work.! ! ! ! ! !
very nice. i think everyone can relate to what you are feeling. i liked the feelings you showed in this piece.
Good write I have read 2 poems you need to read over there are some errrors