Dark Revenge Angel Night

Rookie (05/08/1988 / Germany)

A Love That Will Last - Poem by Dark Revenge Angel Night

A whistle
A kiss
A hug
A 'good bye'
The last thing
I saw of you,
You were
Walking away.

A tear
A sad smile
A 'so long'
A dead body
Now that you
Are gone, What
Am I supposed
To do? Will you
Wait for me? ?

A gun
A puddle of blood
A shot
A smile
To be with you
Again, now and
Forever is my dream
We will finally be
Together again.


Comments about A Love That Will Last by Dark Revenge Angel Night

  • (10/17/2008 4:10:00 PM)


    our sweetest songs are those that tell about our saddest thoughts
    so anyways, i found it sweet, even if there is pain inlaid.

    very crisp and to the point.

    the young writer is inspiring
    :)
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  • (4/8/2008 9:21:00 PM)


    a very sad poem...the end? certainly not. look at the east. happiness rising... for you... and for you alone... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 7, 2008



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