A Lyrical Proposition Poem by Stephen S. Yeandle

A Lyrical Proposition

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Let’s take our holiday
beneath the sheets.

Break the chains of all
restraints.

No good mornings,
no good nights.

We’ll move to the rhythm of
a private beat.

Twenty four hours,
we’ll set the goal.

The lake will flood
but the levee won’t break.

A bullet proof
encounter,
that’ll last for a day.

'Ferris' Wheels and
Roller Coaster rides.

A carnival event.

It won't matter if
it's day or night.

Again
and
again
until
we
get
it
right.

Saturday, December 23, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: flood,chains
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Esther Leclerc 18 February 2007

Lyrical indeed, replete with clever imagery. Great ending, tho' the end isn't the point!

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