A Made Up Love Poem By My Friend(Agnes) And I(Rachael) Poem by Rachael Wai Ai Ching

A Made Up Love Poem By My Friend(Agnes) And I(Rachael)

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Love is a precious thing to behold, it shelters you from the cold.
When you're blind, it gives you sight.When it's dark, it is your light.

I think I have found that special one, he is my heart, my moon and my sun.
He makes me HAPPY when I'm sad and he makes laugh when I'm MAD.

He gives me encouragement to be bold, and when I need to cry, he's there to hold.
He gives me strength when I'm weak, for the meaning of my life he helps me.

I hope he'll always be a part of my life, and may someday I'll be his wife.But right now, all I can say is I'll love him more everyday.

''Who is that? '' you wonder

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christian Navarro 09 January 2010

thi is good. but there is still room for improvement

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 09 January 2010

in a way i can see an imagery here and i think it's good!

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