Saturday, January 9, 2010

A Made Up Love Poem By My Friend(Agnes) And I(Rachael) Comments

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Love is a precious thing to behold, it shelters you from the cold.
When you're blind, it gives you sight.When it's dark, it is your light.

I think I have found that special one, he is my heart, my moon and my sun.
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Rachael Wai Ai Ching
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Christian Navarro 09 January 2010

thi is good. but there is still room for improvement

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 09 January 2010

in a way i can see an imagery here and i think it's good!

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