A Meal Of Knuckle Sandwich And Humble Pie Poem by Dizzy Darling

A Meal Of Knuckle Sandwich And Humble Pie

Rating: 5.0


krupa could make swiss cheese out of Roach
If he can catch him that is.

Roach is burning in the ash tray
while Krupa is burning in the drapes

Roach is an oncomming tempest
he places your finger on the pulse

Krupa is like an octopus arms all over the place
Roach is like an electric eels embrace

Roach knows foreplay but krupa surprises me
just depends on my mood I guess

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

A captivating write with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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