A Mind At Peace Poem by ritty patnaik

A Mind At Peace

Rating: 5.0


ease a tired mind
and rest a while,
with natures fragrant
flowers wild..
watch the dove
carry the message of peace,
and the leaves sway,
in soothing soft breeze...
when the nature is content
the heart glows bright,
in nature it sees the
innocent beauty
of a child.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 17 January 2010

The humans are on march, nature is agonised, the dove of peace is long shot down, fragrance of wild flowers exist no more and yet your hope invoking write, love your positive approach, thanks for sharing and for staying hopeful! 10/10

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