Lulu Muffin

A Moment Longer. - Poem by Lulu Muffin

I held that memory
for just a second longer.
I held you before that memory
would vanish away
from my fingertips.

Comments about A Moment Longer. by Lulu Muffin

  • (8/12/2005 12:20:00 AM)

    hello Samantha, with no disrespect, your poem would have read better like this.
    Meaning, write from the heart, but edit from the head. Best of writing luck, Jerry

    If I'd have held your memory
    for one second longer.
    I'd have held on to it, before
    it vanished away.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 11, 2005

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 11, 2005

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