Friday, September 22, 2017

A Moment Of Sad/Mad. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am still dumbfounded by the lack of feeling you have for me.

Don't you wonder why your words have such power?
Aren't you curious as to what they mean?
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Mayroon Jacobs
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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2017

Anger sliding down from tongue gives disappointment. Amazing poem is wonderfully drafted here is thought provoking.10

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May Speak 21 December 2017

Thank you. I appreciate the feedback

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