Tuesday, September 23, 2008

A Moth Sees A Flame Afar Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the Sun and Moon were angry
You could see what they call Eclipse?
There he goes in the darkness searching a Superstar.
Stars never come down from the serene sky my dear
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 02 October 2008

Your beautiful allegory is melancholy and yet it raises a smile at the same time. Bitter-sweet penning. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 24 September 2008

There is pain in this fragile view of the skyscape. A poem of longing for something beyond the darkness. Lovely, Nimal. Warm regards, Sandra

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nimal dunuhinga

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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