Friday, March 27, 2009

A Mothers Pain Comments

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Cloudz are dark,
Sunlight can’t get through,
Rains pouring heavily,
Thumping like a drum on the roof,
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kay j sparkz
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Jyoti Joseph 01 April 2009

wonderful write...10+

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d arm 29 March 2009

intresting topic, it is very thoutful and hooray it rhymes, none of mine do which is kinda of sad... i should try to do that but a great topic amongst rhyming words :)

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Barry A. Lanier 27 March 2009

Thanks for sharing your love and cartharsis of pain in this penning...the descriptive emotion was palable

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