A Murder Of Time Poem by ARSHAJ GAIKWAD

A Murder Of Time



Looking far and wide,
My vision now collides,
A thing hard to recognise,
In it's own disguise.
Laughings of the wise,
I dont know what to say,
As many thirsty spies,
Are looting her away.

Soon there'll be no cries,
And neither birds nor flies,
I know it all today,
That there'll be no way,
No fishing at the bay,
No Earthly bonds to bind,
And SHE'LL be ready to slay,
A MURDER of its kind!

We'll never be all as gay,
As an angry tide,
Can wipe us all away,
Leaving none behind.
And so SHE'LL find a way,
To stop HER own slay,
Can you get away
After comitting such a crime?

So think again twice,
And see that you be wise,
To stop this slaughter n slay,
Before time slips away.
Coz then you'll regret,
When SHE'LL be distressed,
Will surely do HER best,
SHE'LL PUT US ALL TO REST!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priyanka Shinde 13 September 2006

hey the poem is nice ya.. but as being a critic of literary stuff i feel tht the word slay is over used tht it takes the over all effect of poem.. secondly it is kinda in code..what is ur picture of the 'she' might not be well perceived..so could u explain what tht is? ?

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