Wednesday, February 24, 2010

A Never Ending Love Comments

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A poem I wrote to my wife 4 years ago to try and save our marriage after she fell out of love with me. I failed and am now divorced, but I thought I would share the poem anyway...

Although my words mean little,
This poem I wrote for you,
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Chinedu Dike 24 March 2020

Powerfully and movingly penned from the heart with strong emotions. A very compassionate piece of poetry nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. It's a pity that such a wonderful love poem could not turn things around. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched. Life goes on.

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 April 2017

The beauty that I saw that night, And seeing no regret. To touch you for the first time, As we danced upon the floor. Sent shivers down my spine, As I yearned to hold you more scars of divorce. ihave always loved u Susan Sweet memories of the past well described and poetically written and the pain and sorrow of divorce........ and the promise that i have always loved you. such beautiful lines of love.. i love it very very much. tony

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Nikki Alexis 25 February 2010

That is really good. I love it. :)

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