Thursday, July 1, 2010
A New Friend Comments
Rating: ★2.5
i meet a new friend today
he lives far away
he gives me helpful hints
like maybe writing about tents
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Lynn Glover
01 July 2010
This is much better and a very big improvement, remember to watch your spelling, I see several words that need work. A very Pleasant poem to read. Good job. Meet should be met, appriated should be appreciate, and etc. Lynn Not trying to pry but only to help if I can. Lynn
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3/15/2026 4:58:56 AM # 1.0.0
I agree with Lynn, just watch your spelling and you will be fine.After you type in your poem go back and proof read it.God bless. Juan