A New Place Comments

Hi kay cowills, i can see you are a new poet in this site, and you have a good work, you have those terms it takes to build up a poem, but work more on your introductory lines of a poem(first few lines) , and those last ones, they are very crucial, and put in more imagery in your work, more figures of speech and idioms....its makes its fantastic and mature, let them know how you feel by using different things to compare. More grace to your elbow, and am inviting you to read and also comment on my poems. I will really appreciate it? #thanks#

I invite teams you to read my poem, To The Girl Across The Street, written for my first childhood friend. I moved away just after first grade, but have kept n ongoing friendship, as we are now both 50 years old. I hope you and your pal do the same. It must be bittersweet her to leave you behind....A lovefilled write. PEACE