A New World Poem by Awan Larat

A New World

Rating: 5.0


The sun rising up high in the sky,
Brings along the shimmering ray upon my eyes,
The rainbow seem to shine its beautiful colours,
Makes the bystanders to stare for hours.

The world that long ago I felt uneasy,
As the time passed by seems to amazed me,
The words which long time ago was hard to catch,
Day after another I could pronounce it myself.

Belgaum
Up to now I’ve gained many experiences that for me was new,
And I loved to see a lot more from you,
With a wise teacher, a father staying around to guide,
We would cross the river together and go back with pride.


(Thanks a lot prof./Belgaum)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 26 July 2011

Brilliant! Awan! Congratulation for making this great poem your stepping stone into the Poetry World! This thought provoking write shows that Poetry runs in your blood! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York! ...

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Spiritual Seeker 26 July 2011

A teacher a lamp...to walk through an uncharted path is many more times interesting than the regular road, even though it is difficult! You got talent...keep on writing.

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