A Nice, Nice Time Poem by one who waits

A Nice, Nice Time

Rating: 5.0


Same sweet breath
Soft lips
Easy sweat
Your scent unchanged
After many generations
Many miles
Of life

Uneasy
Almost queasy
Feelings flooding
Flashing back
To a simpler
More innocent time

Comfort now
Inside
Understanding the landing
Of a gentler
Sweeter ride

16 17 18 so long ago
Never thought firsts would just be so
Interesting to me
He and she
Had so many things
So many years
Such a nice, nice time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emma Adamyan 10 June 2010

yes yes, straight t the point! loved it

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Deborah Cromer 07 June 2009

Short, but sweet. Simply put, strong thought, nice memory.

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