Wednesday, March 5, 2008
A Pauper's Dreamlike Journey Comments
Rating: ★5.0
When he kept his burdensome head on the velvet pillow
He felt very comfortable,
And the springy mattress shot him to the Heaven.
He walked here and there like a balloon.
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Sandra Fowler
05 March 2008
What an amazing imagination you have. This is very well written, but also very poignant.Take care. Warmest regards, Sandra
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1/16/2026 5:20:48 AM # 1.0.0
This one reminds me of a Jacques Tati film - something rather French and fey about the harlequin reference and the dreamlike other world images. I agree with Sandra - you have a wonderfully surrealist imagination Nimal. Love this one. Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥