A Place Poem by lost soul

A Place

Rating: 4.5


A place
A time
A begining
And an end

What happened to the world that I used to live in?
What happenend to the place I belonged?

Changed in a flash
No turning back
It happened so fast
Now I have to act

A place
A song
A word
A love

A place where you and I belong
What happened to the world I used to live in?
It's still in my heart
But a new world is calling
And there is no turning back

Together we can face everything
Because true love conquers all

Two worlds collide
And become
One full heart

This new world is strange
But I'm ready for the change
And together forever
We shall be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 22 May 2008

Dear Not so Truly a Lost Soul: This is one of your best poems so may I point out a spelling mistake in the second and fifth verses. I think that you wanted to say 'used' as in the past tense. Use is the act of employing. Adeline

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